Archive for August 11, 2008

Prequel To Crimson Hawk

I wrote this after I wrote Crimson Hawk, and I still don’t like that name. The first paragraph in this one is a disaster, I know.

She stepped out of the plane, gazing down the steps and across the runway, following the other passengers across the concrete sea. The night was cloudy and starless.  As they reached the airport terminal, the passengers could see a churning mass of people waiting in the line to reach immigration. “Welcome to China” the sign above the door proclaimed in as many languages as they could fit in such a small area.

As they entered the building they were immediately immersed into the line. Although the size of the line was rapidly decreasing ahead of her, she still had to wait half an hour before she reached the front, and was pointed to the nearest empty booth.

“Passport, please.” The immigration officer said in a thick Chinese accent. She handed her fake American passport over. He ran his finger over the top edge of her passport, while still looking her in the eye. He seemed to find something wrong, he looked down at the passport, opened it up and held one of the pages up the light. He still seemed unsatisfied. He stood up warily, keeping his eyes on her the entire time.

“Is there a problem, sir?” She asked.

“Please come with me,” Again with the accent.

He led her to an empty office, he looked around and said something in Chinese that she couldn’t understand.

“Stay here,” the simple words were hardly recognizable through his accent.

He walked out of the room, glancing back every few seconds as he walked away. She contemplated what to do. She could stay, but then she’d get jail time and dirt on her spotless record.  She could run, but they’d catch her, and then there would be even more dirt. She chose the lesser of two evils.

A man walked in, American by his looks, but wearing the same uniform as her immigration officer had. He had her passport open in his hand. He glanced down at it.

“So, Alison Fuller, is it?” Flawless English. He glared at her.

“Yes, that’s me.” She let out a wide, pleasant, utterly false smile. “Is there a problem, sir?” She stared at him innocently.

“This is a false passport. Where did you get it?”

Her eyes got wide, looking as innocent as she possibly could.

“Sir, its not false. I would never  try and travel on a false passport. I’m appalled that you think I would.” She walked towards him, reaching into her purse. She slid her fingers around a cold, hard, molded object.

She pulled the knife out, and skipped forward before the uniformed man could react. She held the knife against his neck, gazing into his eyes, relishing in his terror, and slit his throat. She quickly jumped back to avoid the majority of the blood pumping out of his newly unoccupied body as he fell to the floor. She licked the blood off her hand, and then the knife.

She put the knife back in her purse, and walked out of the room, plucking her passport out of his hand and walked out. Her walk took her to baggage claim, she picked up her bag, and calmly left the airport.

After checking into her hotel, she pulled off her blond wig, picked up the phone, and dialed.

Ring, ring, ri- “Hello?”

“The passport didn’t work. Why didn’t the passport work.”

“Uhh… Well… I don’t know.” The voice on the other end pleaded.

“Yeah, right, you don’t know. I should have gotten what I paid for. I paid for an authentic American passport.”

He sighed. “You’re always in this mood after you’ve killed someone. Who did you kill?”

“Vladimir, I killed an immigration officer.”

“They know its you?”

“Probably.”

“Shit.”

“You got that right.” She said.

“Anya… I’m sorry. Any way I can make it up to you?”

“Go jump off a cliff.” She hung up.

She pulled a hand gun out of her luggage, and walked out of the hotel room.

The first person she saw was a cleaning lady, she walked by, gun in plain sight. The next few people were just as unimportant. When she reached the lobby there was a police officer talking to someone behind the desk. She shot them both.

People started screaming. She was hyper-aware of the sound of her shoes, the echo off the walls, click, clack, click, clack.

More police officers came in running. Bang, bang, bang, click, clack, click, clack, bang. Six people dead in five minutes. She felt accomplished. A child was crying, SWAT would be here soon. She walked towards the door, and put the gun in a dead cop’s empty holster as she walked out the front door, she got in to a waiting taxi.

“To the airport, please.”

Yet again, a story I only half like.

Wooo, first short story

Might be somewhat disturbing to some people… I guess. Only people that are completely and utterly sheltered from the blood-soaked media. Its called Crimson Hawk, for lack of a better title.

She stepped out of the bathroom, a thick hotel towel wrapped around her. She unwrapped the towel, using it to dry her hair as she walked to the mirror. She got dressed slowly, only half an hour left.  Finally, as she pulled the tight red dress over her head, she heard a knock at the door.

“One minute,” she called in her high, clear voice. “I’m almost ready.”

She quickly arranged the dress around her  slim waist and  brushed out her long, silky black hair. She left her makeup sitting untouched on the bathroom counter along side a bottle of hotel-provided shampoo. She preferred looking natural, she was pretty anyway.

She slipped on her shoes, picked up her purse from the bureau and opened the door  to see the driver of the limo she had hired, ready to escort her to the parking lot.

“Oh, you’re early,” she said.

“Its across town, miss. We wouldn’t want to be late.”

“I suppose you’re right.” She sighed. She couldn’t exactly say she was looking forward to this.

They rode the elevator to the first floor, and as they walked through the lobby to the waiting limo, she caught the stares of men, following her out the door.

The driver opened the rear passenger door of the car, waiting for her to get in before he shut it. She watched the buildings go by as they slowly navigated through the downtown traffic, the rooftops many meters above her head.

They parked in the back, in an empty parking lot reserved for the restaurant’s more important patrons.  She hopped out of the car, not waiting for the driver to open the door for her. Her heels made a click clack, click clack sound on the pavement.

“What is this place called, again?”

“It’s the Crimson Hawk, ma’am, it’s the most prestigious restaurant in town.”  He said, “I’ll be waiting here when you’re done.”

Click, clack, click, clack into the restaurant. She scanned the tables, seeing Vladimir, the man she’d come to meet. She walked towards him, past the suit-clad waiter asking if she had a reservation.

Vladimir stood as she walked towards him, looking her over. From her silky hair to the long, dark red dress and the black heels.

He kissed her on the cheek when she reached him.

“Anya! Its good to see you. I take it your trip here went well?”

She sighed inwardly, small talk, she hated it. She just wanted this to be over. They talked about  his work, and her recent trip to China. They talked for what seemed like years, until finally the food came. They exchanged comments about the food, and later the desserts, until finally it was over. They both stood, each waiting for the other to speak first.

“Its been so nice talking to you, I hope we can arrange another date some time?” She lied through a false smile.

“Of course, that would be lovely, I’ll call you tomorrow. Would you like me to walk you to your car?”

“Oh that would be wonderful.” Her smile was genuine this time. She took his arm as he led her out to her car. Click, clack, click, clack. As they reached the car she dug into her purse, closing her hand around the smooth , comfortable form.

She pointed the gun at his head, grinning at his short-lived terror, and pulled the trigger. As she put the gun back in her bag, she noticed a small spattering of blood on the tinted window. She wiped the blood off with her finger, staring at it as she walked around the car. There stood the driver, calmly holding her door open for her. She licked the blood off her finger and ducked into the car.

“Back to the hotel, if you would.”

The lack of indentation is quite annoying. I should blow it up. I’ll fix that eventually, aka make my Mom fix it. Constructive criticism is welcome, since I know this story is incredibly cliche and not partiularly well-written.

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